Reflection: Some of the feedback I received said that I had good eye contact, I asked good questions to keep the audience engaged, and kept my composure. In my pitch, I aimed to highlight my strengths and improve some areas I was weak in.
What I changed: In my last pitch, I didn't have complete eye contact so this time I tried to have my pitch more memorized and flow better. This time around, I felt more comfortable in front of the camera, my pitch sounded more natural, and the pitch itself was better.
Hey Ashley,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job at listening to your feedback and trying to change it for your future elevator pitches. Your enthusiasm is really good in your elevator pitch which I think really makes your pitch stand out. You went into detail about your program and how it can help students which also makes you seem prepared and able to sell it to a potential user.
Ashley, I thought you did a great job on this Elevator Pitch. Your opening line was great and as a college student recently graduated from high school you really connected to me and brought me in. You spoke smoothly and fluently, and your information was great. My only feedback is to pay a little more attention to your hand movements so when you aren’t moving your hands keep them together instead of just standing with your arms open. Great job!!!
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