Link: https://youtu.be/zfBZuxdDmcg
Reflection: The feedback I received was very positive and the strong point of my pitch that was addressed in my feedback was that my introduction caught people's attention and that my idea was easy to understand.With that said, in my second pitch I tried to maintain my strong points while also having more passion and movement.
What I changed: I tried to be more engaging in my second pitch but having more personality in my voice and using my hands more. Overall, the content of my pitch was the same, but I tried to spice up the delivery a bit more to give the pitch more life and dynamic.
Hey Ashley,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great elevator pitch. I really loved how you kept your cool and that really was evident that you really improved. From your last pitch I can already notice some improvements from the previous one. You kept your composure and had eye contact to show you noticed the viewer. Overall this was an amazing post and pitch.
Ashley,
ReplyDeleteThe elevator pitch you have created is fantastic and I learned a lot about what your services will provide. You keep the audience engaged by asking questions and bringing up situations that we are all familiar with. I think this high school program is awesome based off of the pitch you gave, great work!